Focal Point

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I've been getting really sick of the lack of melody in electro house tracks, so I sort of fused together a hybrid track that combines the raw, dirty sound of electro house music with the melodic characteristics of a trance/progressive house music.

As usual, I cut the intro (which is just building up to the track) and the end (which is just the track dying down) because I've noticed that the majority of NG Audio Portal listeners aren't very fond of track that are too long or build up too long. On the plus side, I get to fill up my 8MB limit with a higher quality track.

Some things to keep in mind before reviewing...
1) It's electronic dance music, so it tends to get a bit repetitive. That's just the nature and style of it.
2) If there's some things that you feel I should add, replace, or get rid of, feel free to let me know. I'm very open to suggestions, so long as they're constructive. Don't tell me it sucks without giving me a legitimate reason.
3) There are no vocals, and I have no plans to add any for this track. However, I AM considering adding vocals to "In Your Embrace" and already have a vocal mix of "Foxy Lady" in the works.

Thanks for everyone's continued support. Without the listeners, I would've given up on music production long ago.

Hope you all enjoy this one! =)

BPM: 128.000
Bitrate: 224kbps



this track is actually really fun to listen.
The melody is a bit from childish to hmmmmm..... i think there's some passion in it, while the beat is backing up with it's "left and right" rythm. And the effect takes me higher till the end.

Mission accomplished, congratulations :D

P.S. it didn't feel repetitive to me at all, you made some nice use of the sfx.

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RAVEN responds:

Hey Thoraxglycerin, thanks again for yet another review! Glad you enjoyed this track. I'll definitely keep you posted when I come out with another track. Later dude! =)

This is really good man!

I love it, i mean i dnt know what tyo say bad about it, the melody is catchy and not repetative, the beat is clean!
-Love it!

P.S. if you want im new to making music, but i like to make "dance" music. i would appreciate you checking sum of them out see what you think?

RAVEN responds:

Hey Baby3ater, thanks a lot for the review! I'll definitely check your music out and let you know what I think! =)

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4.18 / 5.00

Dec 13, 2009
11:23 PM EST
File Info
7.8 MB
4 min 53 sec

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