Not bad man, not bad...
Sounds good I like it. I think what you're missing is a part in the song that is unlike the rest, and brings out the mood, like a good buildup. Nice job.
thanks man, ya i actually submitted the wrong version now that i listen to the song... but oh well they arent too much different. anyways, thank you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.