This is awesome! Amazing work!
i failed to find this song last year but now ahhh <3 lol
the greatest song in the world
I wish days were beautiful in hell. Hell,Norway. it freezes over i winter, I know I live in wikipedia.
Beautiful days only last so long. But its those moments we strive for. The song reminds me of my childhood.
I like the melody. It seems just a teensy bit 'arpeggiator', if you know what I mean- and I think it's just that last note on the first part of the melody-- where you have two of the same note play, like you've got the intro point "do de dah, dah duh doh dah dun..-dun" that very last note I would change. maybe even remove-- that is until you get really into the driving part of your song 0:30 or so.
Ah well that's not really important, it's still catchy- cool, sounds good. I'm listening on my laptop speakers and it sounds a little bassed out, which is okay, but on regular speakers it might not have enough treble- 'cos my speaks tend to make things sound tinny .
It would also be cool if you had some segues in there, you have one at 1:20, and it's good, but still too similar to the primary melody to add much variation. This isn't getting boring on the second playthrough, but it would probably have more replay value if you added some more sections, a solo here, a filter bass break there, etc.
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