I like the recurring melody theme as well.
Best at 1:30.
Just a quick word....
Try to make several melodies instead of only having just one. It is a nice little piano lick.... but try making a couple of variances. Not just in the octave but in the scales. Have an off beat bit. Instead of only 2 measures for the main melody try to make it 4 or 8 where it isn't repeating. It has potential as many other songs do. But it depends on what you can make of it. I know the score is rather low but since it is only a WIP you have time to progress. Toward the end you had the idea.... but then it was short lived.
I like repetitive, yet gradual buildups, but you do have a point. I was already planning on using several different melodies for this. The end starts the change of melodies as you can see.
Thanks for the feedback =)
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