This is how I would finish your piece
This is what I would *attempt* to do if I were going to finish your piece. Repeat what you have once, then write a new section in a starkly contrasting key. It would be easiest to use the parallel or relative keys. Once you have written this new B section, transition back to the beginning. However, embellish the hell out of it with bigger chords and thicker harmonies. Maybe add one counter melody (in the bass perhaps?) , although that isn't entirely necessary. If you do that, your piece will look like this: AABA.
One last piece of advice: When you write your B section pay conscious attention to the melody in the A section. Do write a new melody, but make sure this melody is related to the original melody in the A section. Recreate the A section melody in a creative way in a new key with darker (or brighter), contrasting harmonies. It should be different enough that it sounds like a new melody, but similar enough that they retain the same fundamental elements.
Good work. Keep composing!
this is what a review should be :D not any of that bollocks just like 'this woz crap do betta plz' :P thanks for the advice, me and a friend of mine have actually extended this piece to about 7 minutes or so now :P and boy does it change ;) might end up on here but otherwise itll be on myspace at some point when its all done : )
thanks again for the review
beautiful peace. the strings in the back ground could be stronger, and more bassy and add some cymbals to show alil motion, well thats how i would have done it :). good wook, could be epic
Thanks a lot :) Yeah I want to add some more strings in anyway but my vsts are playing up a little at the minute so im making do with what i have :P thanks for the review, glad you liked it :)
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