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Just a song I need some input on. Rather stuck were to go with it. Suggestions? Please share :)

Sounds like DBlue fucked up with the drums, I wil fix it when I finish the song.

http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/295166


Good start

The drums in the intro sound pretty strange, as if I was listening to them standing outside a large hall while the drums are played inside the hall. Maybe take away some of the reverb there.

After the intro the kick gets a lot better and I like the melodies you created here. They sound very catchy and I think you could use those as some kind of leitmotif in the finished song.

Later on, at around 1:18 the song gets very messy with all the stuff going on there at once. Maybe if the song developed longer until it becomes this "messy" it would sound better, but right now it just happens too quickly.

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XTriNovaX responds:

Thanks for the review :), if your interested, I finished it, and fixed up most of the issues.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/295166

Pretty shit

You have long was to go until you make some drum and bass. Add sub bass sto that reese thing. I completely don't get what you did with drums. In half of the song there is sound of something like bell instead of snare drum. Song structure is non-existant, first of all, because your track is very short. Sound quality is not too great either. Kick and snare or at least snare should be punchy, reverb seems unnecessary, especially on some drums. Finish the track then upload it. Make a normal drop in the middle.
Finish the track and then upload it because nobody likes to listen to a mess.
You can ask me for a review then

XTriNovaX responds:

Well, I guess everyone is a critic :P Just keep in mind that I am far from done with this track, I would just like some suggestions of were I should go with it. I'm defiantly going to add more sub bases, pads, things like that. The drums arn't even drums at all, with the exception of a kit in there, they actually samples of things like anvil hits, droping glass, etc. And you know not all drum and bass has punchy tight drums, iv'e heard a lot of a break downs with either extreme reverb or delay. But anyways, I do agree its a mess, but I think personally you are judging it maybe a little too harshly. :)

Very good start so far

I noticed some jackass zero-bombed this as the first vote. Obviously they only heard the first two seconds.

This deserves no less than 5/5. The song evolved as it got further into the track, and it's very intense.

I think the only thing you need is a little bit more drum variation, but I guess that's just my opinion. I can't wait to hear the finished product!


XTriNovaX responds:

D: Well thats some encouragement. This in my opinion is a mess, considering the glitchy drum parts are out of wack, the synths need work, and its a tad too loud. But I definatly need to get some variation in the drums, but that wont be hard. I hope to have this completed soon. Thanks :D

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Credits & Info


3.38 / 5.00

Dec 11, 2009
1:30 AM EST
Drum N Bass
File Info
3.8 MB
1 min 39 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.