Love it! Very fast and upbeat. Perfect length too. I think the piano was awesome, my opinion: don't change anything with the piano.
glad you liked it! thx for the review ;)
quite good! :D
very awesome intro with the choice of instrument as well.
strange bass like that guy said.
and weird distortions on the chorus.
but this was a good piece!
awesome work man!
This song probably has one of the best and original intros that I've heard on newgrounds in some time. The piano part was also very good, very "bouncy", which I don't usually like but here it seemed alright.
However, although the distortion was good, the song was very long for what material there was. It was extremely repetitive in other words. There was basically two parts (an A and B) and then a combination of the two, so I suppose a C-part as well. Normally this wouldn't be a bad thing. However, since the song seemed to just go on and on with this idea for about 5 minutes it was just too much.
I think that maybe if the piano part was changed to a more "synthesizer" like part and given a little solo deal in the middle of the song it would break up the tedium of the piece. And all around shortening of the song would help.
That being said the song is in no way bad. It would be perfectly fine...if it didn't go on to the point of being irritating. But its irritating the way a small cute child can be. It gets on your nerves...but for some reason you still like it.
thx for the review and the tips
I don't have much more to say than Babokon, the "distortion" on the bass could stand some mastering. The intro was unique, not heard anything like it. It was very repetitive, but the melody kept it going wonderfully. Not too long, not too short; keep up the good work.
thx for the review! ;)
I can tell a lot of effort was put into this. Now, let me critique it. Your bass is kind of unoriginal, but the great, side-chained piano definitely made up for that. There was some distortion, so try to fix that. Anyway, here's your score: 8/10 4/5
Keep up the good work.
thx for the great review! very helpful ;) oh...and some of the distortion was intentional. =)
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