Lose the drums!!!
I would suggest ripping out all of the percussion and focus solely on the piano.. Really nice keywork though. Definitely a very versatile artist!
I'm voting 5 ... 4 for the piece itself and 1 additional to counter the effects of any zero votes you might get.
Thanx =-) did u look at PF BETA? cause i calmed it down a bunch so its not so distorted and such and i think the percussion sounds alot better but the guitars need soem work there !
its a great song even tho its distorted !
Reminds me of my self when a was doing my first steps in music ! Check out my "Imagination" and you will see what i mean !
yeah i am working on that distortion...hopfully makin a couple versions to get it ready for the collab!
I like what you have done, however you should consider adding more instruments, like I can hear strings or something like that. I can still appreciate if your intention was just piano and percussion. However, there is one problem (why clarity is an 8)...you need watch the volume level of your track. It peaked too high at one point and started sounding distorted. Maybe try using a compressor? Other than that I like it!
yeah i think i should turn it down....i am editing it as i type this and makin a beta version i am just trying to make a good track for th ecollab if i get in!
OVERRIDE OH NOES
This was a nice song but the override(audio so high that it distorts) made me just want to turn off my speakers!
srry i will change it