Love the feeling that this gives. Also agree that this isn't so much of a DnB song. Maybe a house or techno would be better. But love the melody and the drums of this. Agree also that maybe a counter or background melody would be good. Nice job:) (Reviewed, return the favor;) )
Really liked this. Definitely a good house, dance type track. Would not classify this as DnB though. The end gets kinda weird, like there is a note or two off key or something, but I guess that's because its just a demo. Anyway I'd say keep going where you are going with this and make it explode after 48 seconds. Big and booming, keep the beat pumping and throw in some backing melodies or something. I dunno I don't write this style so not may area to give too much advice but I could definitely hear this turning into a righteous groove.
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