Hi. I think this makes a terrific little prelude. It's simple, sweet, and sad. The harmonies remind me of parts in the opera "Dido & Aeneas"; specifically, "Dido's Lament", which is near the very end.
I'm giving it an imperfect 8/10 because the ending didn't do much for me. Somehow it seemed that the moving 8th notes had already been over with and the piece was drawing to a close, and at that moment you chose to play them again and I thought by then I'd had enough of that motif. Maybe I could be convinced differently after hearing the whole piece, so... happy writing!
Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback. I will take your point about dragging the song on into account for future works.
im not an expert
it sounds simple maybe its not i dont know
well but i pretty much dont give a damn cause its a nice song
2 votes and 0 rating
i say fuk kidlike blammers
ingnore them and keep going m8
haha thanks for the encouragement and your review. Its nice to get some constructive feedback
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