This was good
First of all, I like the length of this song. 3 minutes 25 seconds of techno fun.
One purpose of techno is musical experimentation -- I can hear a great deal of that in this piece. One part of the melody seems to be intentionally off the beat, and depending on how the author plays this unusual thing, it can be either strengthening or weakening. It's also a matter of personal taste -- and sometimes it's an aquired taste. Best to let viewers decide how they feel about the off-beat section for themselves.
Some sections tended to be kinda repeptitive, but given the length of this song, I'm not gonna blame you for that. Perhaps more variation in the melody could solve this problem.
Still, this is a nifty song, I'm definitely keeping it. I love your techno style -- keep up the good work. ^^