Ok so, this is my second attempt at trying to make a new demo reel. I made this one with advice from a couple of of friends. It's shorter than my other one but still lacks music and is unpolished.
After getting feedback before, I'm posting this up to see what more feedback I can get before finally settling on a new demo reel. Hopefully by January I'll get the right reel for the new year to display what I've learned in twelve months.
NOTE: I made this before reading any feedback from the last rough draft I posted on NG so don't think I didn't listen to your advice before.
Expect maybe one more rough draft this year, maybe, before I finally release a new one.