Composition and Volume !!
I see u wrote a small qoute about people taking you down with zero`s !
I have a couple off those on my tale as well, i just say leave them be ! :D
Now as far as your track goes:
I hear very nice potential when the track is halfway ! The first part is not consistant.
The melody is to different from the background, its just too much together !
But we all learn here ..right !;D i think you should take one or two things out off it.
And position the sounds a bit better, and it will have a real nice composition.
The Transition at 1.50 is really nice.. but then u put again.. too much together !
THe stutter synth.. Should be a Clean, long tone...that way it gives the front tones more depth.
Overall a track were you can learn alot from...
Keep trying ;D
I just re-did it and tryed to follow your advice. The new song name is Power Fluctuates.
Thanks for the great review :-D I really appreciate it..
Doesn't sound to my liking.. again
It may sound good on your setup but there was too much high frequency sounds for me. Melody is nice but it is hard to heard through the glitchyiness of the sound. I bet you have multiple channels of drums playing at the same time. I think you tried too hard and to be honest it wasn't enjoyable track but if you changed few stuff it would be alright.
I wouldn't like to tell you to stop using gated synths or your gated limiters or w/e because chances are it will sound much better in your next track because you are trying so hard :| Anyway, focus on sound quality in general
Im workin on it still!
decent track man
this is pretty good. however i feal that you miss out on some basslines, you also need to mix it a little more maybe cut some middletones off so the compression will be more focused arround the bass kick. also work arround with some reverb and delay ambient effects. composing wise this is great and with those small changes it would be a great trance track.
about the zery bombing retards, i agree wit you there, but unfurtunatly i dont think its going to help.
Yeah, Just trying to bring some reason and logic to them :-)
I saved the project and Im still working on it :-)
Compression techniques are somewhat of a weak point in my music, Im working on it still.
Thanks for the review man!