You got the flow; it didn't feel irregular once. But on a professional outlook, maybe turn the vocals up a bit. Good job, keep it up.
Yea I've been workin on mixing much this past few weeks, Thanx for the advice and the review.
A lyrical delicacy!
A poetic blast of godlike lyrics just penetrated my headphones and wormed it's way into my head.
After I recovered from being blasted by the lyrics, I manage to gather myself together again and write this out whilst listening to the song, in a semi-trance.
You truly have talent when it comes to making songs that not only amaze with their smooth, mesmerizing rhymes and somewhat laid back, mellow beats, but pummel the listener into their seat with the fast, well thought out lyrics that draw you into the song and lock you in a trance that lasts until you pull yourself out enough to click the stop button on the song.
I have to say that the Marilyn Manson reference at the end of verse two made me smile, It was a nice little nod to the reverend. I have to say, the sound of the demons' voice sortof contrasted starkly to the smoothness of the rest of the song. It's kind of like a knot in the grain of wood if you want to make a visual analog, it stops the quick fire pummeling of the lyrics and breaks you out of the mesmerizing beat, but because of that it makes you need to hear the song again to regain the lost nirvana.
On another note, I respect you for your ability to do your songs with little profanity, it gives it a more professional feel to it, and adds to the smoothness of the song.
Keep up the good work and blow us away with more stuff like this!
White boy out.
wow dude, this is the best review i've ever had, it had me standin up yellin and accidently pourin beer on my roomie. Thanx alot for the props, The demon voice is supposed to sound like the dude from power rengers that is just a beam of light, I forget his fucking name lol but yeah, that represents the demons that I battle everyday trying to create sumthing clever yet acceptable. I'm glad you enjoy this clever transition from the norm and thanx for the review.
Amazing track right here, flow was insaneeee. The hook and beat were real nice too. No flaws to speak of on this man. Stay up!!! 5/5 10/10
Thanx man, I appreciate that.
i never rated this? Nice job on this. Dude ur first laugh sounds crazy as hell in my new headphones!
You bastard! mine are on the way, lol
Skillz skills skilla!
Lyricism at its finest. I can't even choose a favouite line because there are so many. Well done man.
haha thanks, can't wait for the collab to drop
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.