Whoo! This is a pretty big improvement from anything you had written before. Hey wait a minute...
*goes to check if this was submitted before or after Chaoz Fantasy by ParagonX9*
Yup. You ripped him off good with that intro.
Okay back to the track, yeah you're using some nice filtered sounds and subtle background pads and well rounded drums and all that. Your production values really went up a few notches. There's almost no trace of your earlier shittier endeavors, well except the terrible piano and occasional horribly reverby kick drum.
The composition is better too, you have neat transitions.
Woohoo!!! Getting through your songs is getting fun and easy.
Oh 7/10, that's higher than I expected!
But yeah I was unimaginably proud of this one. It was my first ever Trance song and I loved its atmosphere. This song has a pretty spacey atmosphere to it that I think I'll probably have trouble replicating today. Bad production and stuff though.
Yeah and everyone says I ripped Chaoz Fantasy. But I'm totally OK with that because Chaoz Fantasy has a godly melody.
Also shoosh I like the piano melody in this track :(.
Thanks for reviewing!
It's good but I felt that the drums could be more pronounced, and were a little too fast for a chill song like this.
It also seemed like there was a little too much going on at once.
The piano was very good, you had good melodies, and this is quite relaxing.
The biggest problem that I had is that a lot of the synths sounded very video gamy to me. That doesn't really suit trance very well.
I, again, must comment on how good the piano was, you are quite good at that. Maybe try making some Ambient, you'd probably do very well.
Wow, thanks for the review!
Yeah, I admit I completely messed up the drums this time. And the samples are horrible :(.
As for the song having too much going on at once, I'll have to agree with you as well. This song was very cluttered, especially after the quiet part.
As for the melodies, I'm glad you liked them. I personally think they're some of my best melodies. The piano, well, I'm a piano player myself so I try my best :P. I have a few other piano songs, such as Cries of the Tormented, Night in the Forest, Not a Care in the World, Spacewalk and Power of the Piano, they're probably much better than the piano part in this.
The synths, yeah, it was my first trance, so I couldn't really get the synths right. Also I'm not a regular listener of professional trance, so I'm never too sure what synths to use.
Wow lol, you liked the piano more than I expected xP. It was a sort of addition that came to me naturally - I almost always try and incorporate piano in my trance songs, and I have to admit I didn't work too hard on the piano part, but I'm glad you liked it! Also, I tried making ambient, and although people did like my ambient intro in Cries of the Tormented, for example, I can't stand making a whole ambient song. Ridiculous amounts of harmonizing, beautiful synths, loads of effects and stretching notes to two bars each isn't my thing xP.
Thanks again for the review, and sorry for the long response =/.
GR8 JOB, FOR YOUR FIRST TRANCE IT WAS VERY GOOD, IT SOUNDS LIKE YOU'VE BEEN MAKING TRANCE ALL YOUR LIFE, I LIKE THE DRUMS AND EFFECTS AAND THE WAY YOU USED A LOT OF INSTRUMENTS AND KEPT IN ORDER WAS SIMPLY AMAZING.
SO 10/10 AND 5/5]
P.S. Don't listen to Naysly, He probably sucks ;)
OMG LOLOLOLOL THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!! I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT EVEN THOUGH IT'S MY FIRST TRANCE, LOL!! ANYWAY, THANKS AGAIN, GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT!!
Nice, gd trance
It started off really gd, but then got a bit dull half way through cause was a bit repetitive, think the calm bit was a bit too long in the middle.
But the song had plenty of variety of rhythms and speed. I was gna write u shud add more high and low phases, but then when it got towards the end, u did a fine job of this so tht point vanished lol
Only sayin the obvious but ovbiously u put in a lot of effort and this song is much more then enough to be gd, so it totally deserves a solid 10. nice one :)
And lol to the guy who gave a 0 below me.
Hehe, thanks! The intro is what I worked on the most, TBH :P. I had done the intro and saved it as 'Idea 17' (lol, so far I have 24 different ideas, and about 10 of which were turned into songs :P), then for like a week I kept opening the FLP and adding little things to it here and there xP. You're right about the middle; that ambient part did drag on pretty long. Well, it's my first trance, so in the future I'll be sure not to make these mistakes ^^. I have a really good laid-back creepy trance song in the works right now, so I doubt I'll be able to come back to this, but your points will be remembered for future songs :). Thanks for the 10, the feedback and the helpful review!
but i kinda wish it was a little longer. oh yeah...i just saw the paragraphs and decided to skip...hehe..too much for me to read right now. Good tune though.
Oh lol :P. I keep making long author's comments X(. Anyhow, thanks for the review. I might make it longer sometime, but for now you'll have to stick with 3:10 :\. Thanks again!
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