This should be a jingle in a commercial
For a microwave brand ;)
It'd be better if this tune played from the microwave when nuking food and waiting for it to cook =]
haha, Thanks xympul
Reminds me of Ben Folds
You do have a good voice and the backing vocals are great. The put it in the microwave hook is too hooky and too often for me personally but that's not to say it's a bad thing. Keep writing tunes and people are sure to listen and enjoy :)
Funny, simple, and gleeful to listen to.
I want to start out by saying that you have a beautiful voice. Have you ever considered trying out for some musicals? You'd make it, hands down.
At any rate, on to the review:
I loved the concept of the song. The fact that you could take something as simple a microwave and make a tune out of it is just great, and the song itself turned out fantastic.
The lyrics were wholeheartedly tongue-in-cheek funny, and the rhyming structure was nothing less than fantastic. I never felt like any part was too repetitive, and everything blended perfectly into the refrain.
The piano was a nice touch, and added a great background tune to the song that it wouldn't have been complete without. I also liked how you used yourself for acapella, the effect you were going for really turned out great. Your voice was just fantastic, and it really reminded me of a Broadway performer. You hit all the notes perfectly, and I never felt that a single section felt irregular or slipped up.
Yaddahoo, this is a wonderful song, you're a wonderful artist, and I can tell you're going to go places.
Keep up the good work, and keep those vocals strong.
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review. You made my day.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.