it was okay
but it had two main problems
1a) song was kinda cool, but had no backgrounds whatsoever. drums weren't bad but having nothing to support the very repetitive melody
1b) transitions were abrupt and backgrounds could have fixed the stutteryness (i don't think short sounds are bad). i just think it needed a driving core to the music
2) song title. i did not get the impression that this song was 'lighter than air'. the sound was heavy and, in my opinion, needs some modifications to the sound to get a 'light' feeling
Gasp, constructive critism! You actually make a lot of good points. I was actually having trouble finding a "driving core".
Yeah, Lighter than Air is a bad title for this song. I was having trouble thinking of a name. In fact, I'm going to change it right now!
Thanks for the review!