Weak, but long.
You made some decent stufff, it lacks any spice, but not bad. BTW it's very long with plenty of variations, you know some music theory. Keep at it and add some funk on it, I think this could be epic.
Thanks, your review was very professional!
My approach to the genre is simple and minimalistic. Even though I tried to make a clean-cut track, I'll agree that this is very lackluster. I'll take your advice and try something new.