It's a Start
Between :18 and :56 (lol almost a whole minute) needs work. I'm particularly referring to that oddly split beat. I know you have it going back and forth quickly with 16th notes. But you can't hear the one on the beat, but the second one making it sound like someone is trying to speed up or being late and gives it a very out of sync sound. Maybe that was what you were going for lol.
I think that's where you lost your feel in the song. Then it picked up quite nicely again near the one minute marker and there, your odd beats worked because they weren't the melody.
So I think you either need to add or take away from that begining.
Hope you get this.
Man I miss listening to you music lol. I miss making it too -.-
Keep it REaL
this is very good, but it really needs to be finished, hope you do :)
keep it up.
however I find it lacks.. interest.. I dunno how to explain it.. I just find it relies more on progressions and less on some sort of inner feeling - you know? Sounds cool - but when you really look into it there isn't much that really composes it - it relies a lot on repetitious arpish melodies..
I dunno - I've heard better from you.
finish this man
I'm just getting started with FL9 and listening to this makes me think that I still have alot to learn, but Im concentrated on something more similar to Hardstyle, but I like doing Trance too. Well man, keep the good work. 10 for you.
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