For a first
Good, for a first submission. But if you want to make this into a song, you're going to have to add more, such as basslines, melodies, chords etc. Unfortunately, kicks, claps and voice synthesisers aren't enough to make a song.
Mabey have a look through some of your plugins, such as Fruit Kick, DX10 and Styrus.
Keep going, you'll get good :D
i just got bored dude, thanks for the sugesstion please check out my numa numa FLremix its way better