You might want to consider a few things.
A few things. You seem to know your trance 'sounds' quite well however, I highly suggest you take a music theory class before you continue writing pieces. It takes a lot of practice and A LOT of musical training. I myself am a professional musician but, it's taken me 14 years to get to that point. Start with an instrument and learn how to play it before you put in chords to FL Studio (a mediocre production software).
Well this is my very first song and it is quite boring i hear ya.I dont think it deservs a 0,more of a 5.But,its your opnion.I will get better though.
this is pretty damn good
but i kept waiting for it to drop into some kind of awesome beat
i think with drums this will be quite amazing
oh yeah.Definately with drums.I practiced out drums and created my first awesome beat.Check it out,its call Clubcruiser.Way better than this!