Pretty good beginning, nice roll in and stuff
The main lead is definitely too loud in places and it doesn't sound well distorted or it is the consequnces of flanger effect. Note when the sound appears scratchy and add limiters (0:20). I think your track doesn't have a real bassline, there is something second lead and it is similar to the first one and is also sawy. I think that what makes it sound kind of "on the top".
I added no limiters, and my volume levels were a little shaky at parts.
Well, Im working to correct it.
Thanks for the great review!
As for bass, yeah, i'v got a LOT of saws combined in this song, a bass would get lost in it. You can bearly even hear my hits. Blahhh
Its good but...
I think it sounds really great but personally i think you need to figure out a better way to transition from the buzzy intro part to the more atmospheric part. Maybe a cross fade sort of thing. But other then that its really great! keep up the good work!
I kinda rushed, a bit I suppose.
Thanks for the review :-)