Pretty nice and relaxing. Nice work!
Look At The Tittle.
Thanks. I'm glad it was interesting.
I didn't really enjoy this. Sorry, but it was too repetitive. I'm going to have to agree with magicbullets on this one.
Very boring very fast.
Although I applaude the effort,the song gets very,very,boring.It's a long loop of the same thing,besides the drums and the guitar.
This could be the start of a awesome song though!
Didn't enjoy the song much...
I didn't enjoy the song much, mostly because I really didn't like the main synth, felt too empty, and maybe a little childish...
As far as the instruments go, the guitar is the best, it was ok, but not fantastic. And the drumline was quite a simple one I guess, nothing to comment on it. The way you made the instruments follow each other could have been better in my opinion, it was maybe to clean... But most of all, the song was too calm, it never gets a little more active here or there. And being wasn't the biggest of problems, I think the biggest was the fact that it stayed calm, and steady, not changing, meaning it got boring real fast. Now that's a big problem. I understand that we don't always have to do hyper-active techno beats, but if you make a calm song, give it at least a little bit of variation somehow, that's what I would suggest. Let's skip to the scene:
I must give credit to palee81 for helping me get to this scene:
In some kid's room, is an ordinary desk, and on this ordinary desk, lays a classic blue and pink eraser. What I'm telling you today, is the story of this eraser, whom we'll call bob.
So bob the eraser was quite a normal eraser, only that this eraser understood that it could think. So it would lay on that ordinary desk, and think all day long. And one day it looked out of the room's window, and saw a blue sky, and clouds passing by. So bob started dreaming about how the world was like outside. And all day long he would also look at the days passing by inside this room. The kid wakes up in the morning, gets dressed, goes out of the room to eat breakfest, comes back to take his back-pack and leave for school. Afterwards comes Joe, the family dog, who arrives and takes a nap. After a good one hour nap comes mom, who kicks the dog out and cleans the room. Nothing happens much afterwards until the kid comes back from school and hangs around until night time and goes to bed.
An ordinary day seen through the eyes of an ordinary eraser, so next time you fall upon an eraser like bob, why not say hi?
Hope you enjoyed this wierd childish scene,
That's the most fucked up thing I've ever read.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.