good approach, yet lacking...
its a great song/beat however i think yyou need to find your place. i like your sounds for the 8-bit feel you really captured this perfectly good job! i like the idea of mashing a bunch of diff sounds together in defferent sections so the listener gets a feel for all your stuff, but i think it should be done in a different manner, instead of an actual song itself. good work and love the build up of beat+sounds . i'll be listening for you down the road when i can!
Thanks for the response! This is my first attempt at doing anything 8-bit and hip hop as well so thanks for the feedback!