its worth it- i like your beat overall, and LOVE how you cut out @ about 40 sec- that beat you added is HOT! i really think you did a good job on this- you make anything other than beats?- the grove @ 1:20 is tight and makes the song that much more worth it- you make beats to buy or just for fun like most of us? keep it up and check out the message i sent you!
See the work but...
I like the work you've put into this but it needs more thematic variation. It got dull and repetitive after a while. Drums were good and had some good beats but at times they were too chaotic. Work on your transitions from theme to theme. Nice atonality with the synths around 1:30. Nice transition at 1:35. Overall nice work but you can make it better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.