Not so bad.
This is pretty good; I like the effect you're getting at. The music seems to vary a little much in terms of melody here and there. You need a stronger theme, although it's very pretty as is.
Cool I replied... only took me THREE FREAKIN' YEARS... lol yeah the melody's weird but heh I through it together in a manner of minutes.... So yeah. Thanks for listening.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.