Good nuff :)
Noticed this is the midi you've sent me lol...
I also now see, I fucked it up instead of what you did to it haha.
Loving this kick, but it's an bit too harsh. Just lower the volume of it slightly. It's just because of the vocals can't get trough, and slightly the melody.
Great intro; Letting the kick fade in slowly with snares is maybe so simple, but oh so beautifull! :3 Loving the 2dn lead, qlimaxed really great. 1sth lead was also good for the intro though, but not personally my fav. :P
Can't really say much more, perfect hardcore track bro!
Good job! :D
I liked it up to 2:30, but after that it was eh..
-The idea and the lyrics are cool, but the voice almost sounds like it's shaking/hesitant, but maybe that's just me.
-The synth is really, really, really hard to listen to after 2:30ish or so. Maybe the beats and all the synths could use a bit less distortion. I understand this is hardcore, but you've made it hardcore to the point where I can't listen to the song for any melodies without slightly cringing.
-As for the beginning two minutes, the voice is almost overridden by the synths because the synth is so much louder than the voice. At least until the voice goes away, maybe it'd be better to have the synths be slightly quieter so that we can bring more attention to the lyrics.
Hope my review helps a bit. I liked your idea, but I'm not into the crazy distortion stuff. Sorry man haha.
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