I think you show some chops here and there is actually no real downside to your playing. I also practice guitar in case that matters :).
There is one problem with this track though. It has nothing to do with the music (I would never complain about that). The problem is that it needs to be mixed and you might need a noise gate of some kind. When I listen to this through a flat eq, It was a little noisy. But that's just my opinion.
sorry it took me so long to respond, haha, thanks for the advice, and compliments ^^
it really does. i recorded it using an old vocal microphone that smells slightly of marijuana, haha. i don't think it's too bad. (static-wise) it's definitely not my amp, just the mic. i'll try a noise gate next time =)
Nice. Could use a little lyrics though but nice. 10/10.
it could. i might. maybe. umm.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.