It's a different sound. I would have liked it to be a bit longer, maybe more lyrics and a more defined bridge. You voice is fine, didn't hear any pitch problems, seems to go with the music well. I was having a hard time deciphering the lyrics. Fractured spine for your soul? a slave to you? I think that's what i was picking up. Maybe it's left to interpretation.... So yeah. Good work overall.
Wow this was just an old one I found in my harddrive...
The lyrics are something like:
a slave to,
my fractured spine,
there's nothing left for me to hide,
it suffocates my mind...
left to fight... for your soul...
I just kind of went for it... Was never meaning to post it but glad I did, thanks :)
The thudding I heard here and there were a bit of a turn off though.
Yea my sound card was having issues and I was still working on getting a mic to go into the soundcard w/o a PA and all that... so it was prob me just hitting the desk or something lol... But thank you... I wasn't sure if this was a train wreck just felt like posting it last night.. :)