In listening through it, I really like the feel of it, just not the flow. The kickass drums come in but jump in and out too much to feel steadily enjoyable - it also partway builds up until it feels like it's about to break out into something huge and epic, but then winds back down. Even still, this was a fun listen and when the drums are there, they're really awesome. Nice work!
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