Just that it'll be better if the song's volume be louder just a little and it'll be fantastic. Great job :)
Yeah. Sometimes the file ends up being WAY too loud so when I convert them to mp3's I need to quiet them some, but in the future I'll make sure they're not too quiet.
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This has great potential, but falls short, through no fault of your own, due to the samples you are using. It's well put together and tells a strong story, but the actual instruments are just too poor to try and create something this epic with. Still, I can hear where you are going with it, and it's very good.
If you happen to be interested, I would be curious to see what running a midi of this through my sample library would it turn it into (Something I've done before for friends and find quite fun).
Keep it up, here's hoping you get better stuff to work with soon. :)
Thanks. The feedback is appreciated, and I'm glad you liked it (short of the terrible midi I am stuck with XD).