Really Long !!!!
weird song. at the beginning, i just wanna shout "yo yo yo" LOL.
note by note
k.... dont like the violin thing at the start. still goin.... ugh turn down the sytrus instruments......... sounds a bit tangly there... damn u volume... hey now ur talkin.. i like the horn sounding part the insrtument wen the drums change...this is heaps better.... yeh i really like this, maybe have an underlying bass instrument.... that riff with the breathy sample is good, did u make it or is it a riff under simsynth? works well in the song. volume ishues again, kinda cancels out the bbass instruments. sorry bout the overcriticality of my review, im not tryin to diss ur stuff im just suggesting wat u could work on. i do like this song a whole lot it just needs some minor tweaking. :)
heh aite man. thanks. BUT i must add, this, as one of my first songs ever, had NO premade simsynth and i didnt even realize there was a whole mess of genarators till i "discovered " them when i was exploring the program. no help manual for charvin =D.
The first song above this one is better.
Once again as I dig deep down into my musically challenged brain. This song told me a story, and it went like this. WTF!!!! Whoa, nice lil ol granny goin to the supermarket, buying a candy bar for her lil grandson, granny crossing the street now. PANG!!!! Granny and lil grandson get hit by a Big Ass Diesel Truck going about 80 miles an hour, but the both live somehow. Well The beats were unique, this sing sounded like it belonged in a video Game, something like Destruction derby. Work on it :P