it has a good potential, but the drums are a bit random for me, anway, try to flesh out your songs with more leads and melodies, but thats just me :p
Thanks men :)
I'm working for make something good and beautiful ;)
This one's a bit better than your first one
This one's still missing that little something but, you got a cool funky tempo in there. That's pretty unique, and that's essential in songwriting. Continue to work on it and I see you improving very quickly ^.^
Thank' to you !
I will make an other song this week and try to make something complete ;)