up to about 1:03
I really liked that part,it made a great intro.
the next 30 seconds has SO much possibilities.
I would increase the length of that part and expand on it.
Intro again-should ave a different bridge for there, maybe a bass heavy part?
(now at 2:16)
I like the beat, maybe add a little bit in there and have a different outro rather than the intro once again.
Overall, great tune, 4/5
Thanks for the review, i'll see if I can add to it and make it better, thanks for listening
I like the main tune
but yu butchered it.. so much more could have been done imo
Thanks for your review, ill see if I can do something with it.
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