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October Winds (Anthouse21)

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[UPDATE] BTW, for those who care... This is my first time singing on track... I tried lol

Every October I feel a dark cold feeling stemming from very sad memories of my first love and all of the things I went through with her, but put up with because I loved her so much and how I know we both still love one another but because we live so far away we carry on our lives with other people. The lyrics are very descriptive of the feeling I get whenever that cold season comes around and I'm reminded of my past.

The beat is Hip-Techno by Anthouse21, used WITH permission. SO IF I'M BANNED FOR USING IT LIKE ON MY OTHER ACCOUNT I'LL BOYCOTT NEWGROUNDS FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE...

*ahem* ...Enjoy?

=LYRICS=

i can taste the sorrow in the air,
almost there but not quite fair,
i only want to make you happy,
in a memory you have trapped me,
pain inside when i think back,
moving forward, stay on track,
the coldest that I've ever felt,
why for me was this hand dealt,
re-emerging memories bring me pain,
moving on, drift my life away,
i remember still when i kissed you,
it's taken much just to dismiss you,
things i've seen and didnt run,
we were so young, you held a gun,
i ask myself why did i continue,
i left a part of myself within you,

innocence abuse i feel so hollow,
no chance seeing you tomorrow,
this time of year i feel it still,
october winds, give my soul a chill,

something in the air,
something unexplainable,
but it hits so hard,
the cold embrace, a far away face,
forget the pain live another day,

innocence abuse i feel so hollow,
no chance seeing you tomorrow,
this time of year i feel it still,
october winds, give my soul a chill,

something in the air,
something unexplainable,
but it hits so hard,
it's so cold, like it was that day,
my childhood thrown away,

Reviews


i feel the song

but crispin up they lyrics, the beat kinda over powers the vocals but then again the song as a whole is felt


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Yeah!

Like i said b4 its a good song and i love the lyrics. Very YOU. But the recording could use work. Like maybe use a compressor to bring the vocals out more. And if you are dubbing your vocals, like recording the same verse or hook more than once try and get it in sync. Other than that its good for your first time singing on a track! And the beat sucks! lol NOT!!!

Anthouse


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DJKorpz responds:

yeah, im still using audacity for mixing and stuff, i tried my best to sync it all up. thanks for lettin me use the beat, it really really fit with all of this well, one of my proudest songs, although the beat is yours lol maybe next time i use one of yours i'll hit you up during the mixing.


Not bad

well it aint a bad track but on hook vocals seemd to run togetha u send put echo in background and turn it dwn and maybe u should change lyrics to match beat more sound like it could b club banger wit lil tweakin


DJKorpz responds:

you sayin to put an echo in the hook or take em out? cuz the only echoes in there were in the intro. and i never intended to make this a club banger really. its just a very personal song i had to get out. thank you very much for your review.

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Credits & Info

DJKorpz
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Listens
1,088
Downloads
63
Votes
59
Score
4.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 20, 2009
5:38 PM EST
Genre
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 6 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.