You're right, it's not a great song. The beats are extremely simple. Put that with extremely abrasive sounds and you get what you made. It kind of sounds like something that was meant to sound epic, but failed.
That was definitely less painful than a straight 0-bomb. Now I at least know what to fix.
p.s Making percussion for 3/4 time is tricky.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.