Like your style here. nothing to not like about his piece. The style is pretty generic, and very similar to all your other songs. But I really can't complain, I do the same thing. Here's the breakdown.
Melody: 2/2(love it)
Bassline: 1.5/2 - it never seems to change, but goes well with the song.
Beat/Variety: 1.5/2 - your drums I think could've had more variety.
Mixing: 2/2 - Very good, but not perfect. I can't expect perfect from anyone
So yeah, keep it up. make more. Branch out a little. do something NEW.
Thanks. If you mean new as in a new sounds and and a make it sound different than my others, then believe me, I WANT TO. But I don't have a whole lot of sounds and things like that which I personally think are good enough. If you mean another new song, then I have some ideas and hopefully I'll be doing something soon.
I think you did a great job, you did perfect with the build ups and drops in the song, but (there is a but) the only thing that I could think that you could have added was maybe some bass. You have the drum bass kick (I don't really know its exact name) but you don't have a bass like bass guitar, and I think that would make it better. Just a thought.
Thanks, but there actually is bass. You might not be able to hear it because of your speakers, but key, idk. Thanks anyway!