Im loving this, even if its a remake i found that you made it your own and it sounds very original, i admire that. Something you could try improving is adding a string sidechaining with your bass, it would add some energy to the song and bridge the gap between the song and the voice. When the melody kicks in with the continuing bass, the voice is not loud enough, maybe add reeverb and turn up some of its higher frequencies to compensate for the bass crowding the lower frequencies. You can also try killing the lower frequencies on the voice but it doesnt always sound good that way. Btw, if im taking time to write this its because im loving this song and want to help you improve it if you wish.
Anyways, keep producing!