It's alright, and actually pretty good for your first submission. The tube effect it REALLY getting on my nerves though, especially when you're hearing this songs through earphones. It gets kinda repetitive, but I guess it's OK since it's a dance song. Good job for your first, and try to take out the tube effect, cause I really don't like it.
Remember, these are my opinions only, so don't take offense. :)
it has some potential...
but it really should be consider greatly revising.
and its definitely not the best.
i like the guitar in it.
just go back to this after getting good at FL studio.
and change the phaser into a filter in the beginning.
pretty good job though,
I only wrote best because of just eurodancer remix was busy :P
i see poetical from this song if you can get the quality of the song better and experiment with those tunes and i know this song could potentially be on the top 30
thanks:D I did it in around 3 hours, is that fast?
this isn't very good.
no 0 for you today though. for a first its pretty damn good, but not my taste. it sounds like the song is coming through a tube.