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{0125} Strive

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Author Comments

My second submission to Newgrounds, still new at it but learning as I go on. Leave reviews on how I could improve, etc.



4 notes, 2 drum instruments, and only one little tune that was repeated far far too many times. And the little tune wasn't all that great either.
You could have changed SOMETHING SOMEWHERE!
You really need to have got more than just one little tune make, and if possible make them flow into each other or maybe change the panning of the notes. SOMETHING!
I think I might be being a bit generous with a 3/10 for this.

0125Beats responds:

I think you might be being a little too harsh...

I'm new to this, and I'm actually starting to realize that I repeat the tunes in my songs. It's good feedback that you are telling me, to change the tune, but the way you are saying it (you keep stressing it over and over) isn't the best way to get it across. Say what you need to say to get your point across on how I need to improve and at LEAST have the courtesy to tell me "good try" when you are finished...you guys are too rude and take everything too serious when you are reviewing.

Thx for the feedback, it is definitely noted...but you do need to realize that I'm just warming up with these songs/loops, a LITTLE encouragement would of been nice...not just raw negative (although good) feedback with no emotion attached to it. Regardless, thx for the review anyway...

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Credits & Info


3.41 / 5.00

Nov 17, 2009
6:49 PM EST
File Info
3.5 MB
3 min 6 sec

Licensing Terms

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