Very emo intro, which made me think that the rest of the track would be major to harmonic minor and instead it got super happy right out of the gate. The intro and the rest of the track are both quality, but the two just aren't right for each other IMO.
Also, I wasn't super happy about that clapping synth that was going from 0:45 to 1:08, and again from 1:27 to 1:43. Even turning it all the way down didn't make it less annoying. I think I would have used a snare or a muted hi-hat instead.
Still, the overall quality of the track was pretty high. you've got the mastering down really well on this. The way you set up the chorus and the electric guitar I thought was really creative. Especially when you took the choir-ish chorus synth and made it the pad for your ending; that really worked well.
well to be honest atm i'm just experimenting with midi and fruity loops...i haven't really got it down pat though...hopefully my next song will be better since i've cut the begining step short...and gone straight to the instrument tweaking right off the bat on fruity loops...my next song will be up in a couple seconds though...also that clapping is in the peercussion as a snare i think...and the song is from a western cowboy kinda game...despite it being an rpg