Hey thats pretty good :)
although i think it's a bit to weak, the melody is good but the back bone of it isn't strong enough in my opinion, feels distant, unless that is what you intended
You know, I'd say distant's a pretty good word to describe this piece. I guess that's due to the fact that I only started work on this about two hours ago, in order to brush up on my keyboard skills a little, seeing as how I haven't played keys in at least a month. If you're looking for some music with a little more meat, check out my piece "Retinal Burn". Aside from that, you're mostly going to find musical demos on this profile.