Okay, so you have some skill...
Much much much better than you first submission. It is very interesting, and well balanced. It never gets too repetitive, don't get me wrong, it is a repetitive song, but in a good way. You are good at this kind of stuff, not... whatever it was you were going for in L.I.Y.S.
Hah, after that other review it's nice to know I'm not completely tone-deaf... Thanks for the review, always good to know what people like to hear.
I suppose this means I have to work on my trance skillz.... >.>