Nice job with this
Good melodies and bassline, however, this needs a severe power boost. If you are going to use a melody with it's relative minor as the harmony and bass I would suggesting using longer more powerful synths for the harmony. And again, turn the levels up on everything. Make this an explosion of epicness in our ears. As of now, it's good, just not great.
woulds been better if it had a more uplifting lead