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This is my very first beat made with fl studio, im still learning the software. if u must be an asshole and zerobomb, then be my guest, and do it somewhere else, unless your going to offer constructive feedback, dont bother reveiwing. i know the loop needs varity, and when its done it will have that, i know it needs something more but im not sure yet. please give me some constructive feedback. much appreciated



I was just like this beginning with it it got so frustrating but i stuck with it.

Not Bad

Not bad for ur 1st beat at all man. Better than me when i first started using FL. We should collab one of these days. Up to you though. You got a start man, practice makes perfect. All i can say is, have patience, dont rush yourself when it comes to making music. And when u start, have a motive in mind. Whats the song or beat trying to say? Get what i mean?
You should check some videos out on youtube. Type this in on youtube. "YTBeatBattle" Got alot of talented people on there too.

death2frame responds:

well to be honest my heart isnt in making bets but writing lyrics, this was just a try at it but thanks

It was cool...

Altough it was a loop, I felt it's missing something
Don't rly know if it was that the song/loop had no surprises like, I think I was waiting 4 something 2 happen but there didn't rly happen anything.
But overall I think it's a cool pieceof music & I think u should keep on doing songs/loops

death2frame responds:

yea i did too bro. but i couldnt figure it out


well, im not gonna repeat anything that the other guy said, but try to flesh out your melodies with leads and follow ups with different instruments, but other than that, good luck man, and im sure you'll get better


first of all this isnt really hip hop at all.. i dont know what genre this is but for hip hop you need more of a steady pattern on the high hats and slow the tempo down very low to like between 70 and 100 also you need more than one melody througth the whole thing and all some more instruments.. keep working at it man youll get it

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thx for your reveiw and feedback

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1.94 / 5.00

Nov 14, 2009
1:38 PM EST
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
1.6 MB
1 min 26 sec

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