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ok.. this is a track im working on pretty hard.. ima make some lyricks for it and ppl are welcome to volenteer to sing on it.. i just have to do the final eddits on the raw acapella before it gets on the track. if noone wana do it ill do it myself.. the lyricks as they are so far:

when you get up and try to escape.
they will take you to commence the rape.
you might cry and fight, only until,
you will be the one they want to kill.

now the cops will be,searching for you.
you will turn away looking for them.
they are still the ones you need to kill.
you will look for them over the hill

( "you want to kill" echos 8 times)

they are all there waiting in line.
asking for mercy which you will decline.
when you do they will try to escape.
sudently they remember the rape.

you are shooting them out of free will.
when the bullets hit, you feel the thrill.
you feal blood, the beat and your own will.
now you know how good, it feels to kill.

( "it feels to kill" echos 8 times)

(i will update them everytime i do changes.. and i will make changes.. feal free to sugest changes in the reviews if u want to.. and also feal free to sugest changes to the track.. i might try them.)



you keep spelling feel wrong...

overall great song!

i know im not a very helpful person :)

combatplayer responds:

lol atleast you did help. and that's what matters ;D (i will correct al the "feals" to "feels" xD)

well done!

i'll be watching this track... and if you need anything from your humble apprentice feel free to ask...

but i will NOT sing lol... not yet. i need to be alone to sing this one lol...
very nice lyrics though =)

combatplayer responds:

lol thanks.. and "humble apprentice" ?!? NICE.. xD

and i like the story of the lyricks too... just need to fix some of the ryhms.. n u definatly need to be alone for this one xD (some of the lyicks are maybe to be yelled or screamed the rockish style lol)

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4.27 / 5.00

Nov 13, 2009
5:57 PM EST
File Info
2.9 MB
2 min 9 sec

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