hmmm~

I guess it's not exactly bad, but it doesn't click too well with me. But you do a nice Techno beat in the first half of the song, especially at 0:38. Also I like the 8-Bit'y sounding melody sequences.
But most of the other instruments do not really sound too great. The strings most of all. Maybe you could save a little bit with them if you'd make them less loud and gave them a lot of echo/reverb, but in general I'd just go with another string instrument.

Anyway, continue making tracks, and maybe focus a little more on your pretty good Techno beat that you have at display and try to support its rhythm more. Then it may even become quite danceable Techno!