this is pretty sweet
I didn't know that there were this many actual rappers on newgrounds.
needs more instruments though.
this is more like rap though
i like the style!
But do something about the Hip hop keeps us alive. You can do better on that!
Maybe layer is with more recordings
What is a trick that proffessionals do is record it 4 5 times and layered it sounds perfect. Because a human will never have 5 times exact the same timing.
thank you for your review bro, i appreciate the tip! you're right, chorus was weak.