im new to dubstep and instead of trying to focus i let my mind go and i winded up with some song thats like dubstep but is led buy guitar and some piano

any comments regarding the combination of these particular styles?

(pls really, just comment on the above, this song isnt finished. for example its not coherent enough, needs more effects to keep it fresh along the song, needs mastering, all n all this song isnt spit on, rubbed down, and polished until it would make a sound like the o so famoush *PLIIINGGG* wich apparently has something to do with the star shaped flash that would shrink your pupils for a while when looking directly towards it.... so were was i?.... oh i know.... i need to close this ... -> )

ok im confused