Like Devn said, quality is definetly sub par... It also feels like it's missing background music. It sounds -really- hollow, it's missing something there. Other than that I have to say I really enjoy the tune, reminds me of some great high quality rock songs.
One more thing that I'd like to add is that I was rather dissappointed at the ending being so much alike the rest of the song. I don't know exactly why, it felt like you threw away a build up.